It was time,
she could bear it no longer.
To escape to the other side,
was her only choice.
She knew the price she had to pay,
but her determination did not sway.
Brave, yet shuddering,
she reached the border,
to face the guarding devils.
Stripped naked,
brutally raped and violated,
to the content of devils’ hearts,
she was strewn over the drying river.
The now crimson coast,
glittered under the blanket,
of the moonlit sky.
With what still remained,
she dragged herself across the river.
Reaching the shore of hope,
she arose, tall and strong.
Every drop of water,
that dripped from her,
drew away all traces,
of the evil’s touch.
Bidding farewell to the dark night,
she walked into the light,
of the now dawning sky.
She dazzled brighter,
than the ascending sun.
For what was mangled,
was only her insignificant body.
Her spirit and soul,
stronger and Exquisite, still,
would build her up,
yet, again.
Yuhu!!
Great work!
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Thanks a lot.. Feedback from experts like you, encourage beginners like me. I appreciate you, stopping by.
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My pleasure! I was stuck today as what to write then saw your post and I must say it encouraged me to write mine π
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Oh, My! This line from you can keep me going for weeks. I appreciate your encouragement. Thanks..
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Keep encouraging me and I will do try to do the same! π
Happy blogging π
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I certainly will, thank you. Cheers. π
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oh god… that is so sad yet inspiring at the same time.
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Thank you Varun!! Your comments always keep me going. I am very grateful to you.
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Well, I am grateful to you for your involvement in my blog and for writing such beautiful heart-wrenching poems.
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Thanks hero. It’s a pleasure reading your work and more so, discussing it. Isn’t that what makes the piece more valuable, a discussion…
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hahaha..hero?? my my. you silly one.
But yes, I would love to have discussion anytime. Especially, after reading your works. It really pulls the readers to you, you know that! I love your works. Hope to see more. hehe… π
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Me being silly does not mean you are not a hero! Thanks again. I will do my best.
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hehe… hero!!! lol. well I wonder in what way am I a hero?
Am I a super? hehehe… π
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Well, you are brilliant in your poems and take your readers to another place and another time. U get my point… π
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Come on yaar, I’m still a novice.
And moreover, your poems are more captivating. Speaking of which, how long have you been writing? I mean besides this blog. In paper and pen maybe.
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Not much really. I wrote two reports with my friend for a college magazine. That’s it. ‘Alone inside’ was my first proper poem (if you could call it proper). You sound (or rather read) like you have been writing for some time now.
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Wow.. all your poems are beautiful.
haha..and no. I haven’t been writing anything before. This blog is my first try into poetry.
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You are gifted. Wow! And of course, needless to say, thanks, Varun!!
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Thanks to you too…um.. yuhu?? that’s your name? hehe.. π
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Why don’t you check your e-mail? The one in your ‘about’ page?
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Thank you .. π
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π
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Simply superb .
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Thanks a lot. π
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