via Daily Prompt: Replacement

Inside your warmth,
I lay furled.
In your pain,
I entered a new world,
so strange and noisy.

They wrapped me up,
nice and warm.
Yet I couldn’t feel,
you or your charm.
So, I cried along.

Bumbling around,
in a bundle,
I was passed on,
to be fondled.
Yet, for you, I craved.

Finally, I sensed,
your loving touch.
My emotions turned intense,
as you wrapped my hand,
gently, in yours.
I saw the reflection,
of my smile,
in the tears clinging,
to your eyes.

There is no Replacement,
for your touch,
my dear mother.
So soothing and healing,
there could be no other.


Yuhu’s corner:
I love you mom!!! This one’s for you.
P.S. Please forgive my bad drawing. I’m an ameteur artist.

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19 thoughts on “Only you

    1. Wow! Thanks Matt. I’m almost crying now. Ha Ha… ๐Ÿ˜ƒ I’m glad you liked it. I used to draw a lot when I was a kid. Then, you know, it became a lot less frequent. I thought I should try again! Thanks. Your comment means a lot to me.

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  1. I loved the way described the birth, the seperation and THE touch and all the emotions….Having no ‘real’ experience yet, remembered the reel Pheobe’s expression…Yes, the same…..โ˜บ

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