Inside your warmth,
I lay furled.
In your pain,
I entered a new world,
so strange and noisy.
They wrapped me up,
nice and warm.
Yet I couldn’t feel,
you or your charm.
So, I cried along.
Bumbling around,
in a bundle,
I was passed on,
to be fondled.
Yet, for you, I craved.
Finally, I sensed,
your loving touch.
My emotions turned intense,
as you wrapped my hand,
gently, in yours.
I saw the reflection,
of my smile,
in the tears clinging,
to your eyes.
There is no Replacement,
for your touch,
my dear mother.
So soothing and healing,
there could be no other.
-Yuhu
Yuhu’s corner:
I love you mom!!! This one’s for you.
P.S. Please forgive my bad drawing. I’m an ameteur artist.
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That drawing is fucking brilliant 😮
So is the poem, but I already knew you were an awesome poet. Now I know you’re a talented artist too!
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Wow! Thanks Matt. I’m almost crying now. Ha Ha… 😃 I’m glad you liked it. I used to draw a lot when I was a kid. Then, you know, it became a lot less frequent. I thought I should try again! Thanks. Your comment means a lot to me.
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You are most welcome 😀
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You are a brilliant amateur. Love your drawing and the poem. Your mom must be proud.
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Wow! Thanks Aweni. I appreciate your feedback. I hope my mother likes it when she reads it. Cheers! Thanks again for the comment. It means a lot.
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Sweet poetry, I loved the ending and how this goes out to all mothers 💙. I’d love if you could check out my poetry blog. https://poetry2473.wordpress.com We could follow each other if you like my writing.
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Yeah sure. I’ll check your blog in a while. Thanks a lot!!! Cheers! I appreciate your feedback
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You’re welcome and thank you 😊
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lovely poem.. 🙂 and the drawing is so nice too.. nicely related to the poem.
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Thanks Varun.
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Super awesome. The drawing contains the emotion of the poem.l envy the mother of the blogger for having such a great talented child.May God bless you.
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Thanks a lot G. Your comment means a lot to me.
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I loved the way described the birth, the seperation and THE touch and all the emotions….Having no ‘real’ experience yet, remembered the reel Pheobe’s expression…Yes, the same…..☺
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Thanks… She acted sooo well in that scene. Too realistic..
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