via Daily Prompt: Baby and Daily Prompt: Slur
The bud of her womanhood bloomed.
He breathed, as the music of her cry loomed.
Once, a life within her,
transformed into her life forever.
For him to arise,
her pain was the price.
The Baby began to weep,
liable for her agony, so deep.
She held him tight,
the bundle in white.
Guilt melted, in her warm embrace,
and into her eyes, he gazed.
Little blue stars shone,
in the blackness of her own.
Her heart made her words Slur,
Her eyes, the world a blur.
Drifting in love’s allure,
mother and son, dissolved in a moment, so pure.
-Yuhu!!
Yuhu’s Corner:
I’m fascinated by the mother-child bond. It’s extremely powerful and yet, gentle and tender. Isn’t it?
P.S. Another good opportunity to say “I love you, Ma”.
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This is one of the most amazing poems I’ve come across today!
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Beautiful poem!
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I become your die hard fan after reading thisππππβΊπ
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My pleasureπππ
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Nicely express and crafted. Indeed, their bond is like none other. Women are truly something unique, they deserve so much.
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Absolutely. I’m glad you shared your views. Thank you.
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It’s my pleasure.
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This is a lovely poem on the purity of the mother-child relationship. You’ve described the pain of the birth as well as that of the baby’s cries in a mother’s ears apltyl. And the last line… Melted me to mush. Beautiful. I’m glad you found me π
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I’m glad that I discovered your blog. Such wonderful illustrations. I’ve tried drawing too, but nothing like yours. I look forward to seeing more in your art and illustration section!
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Oh thanks a lot. Look forward to more of your poems too π
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Thanks a lot!
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You’re welcome π
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Cheers π»
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Motherhood is always cherishable.A woman becomes whole only when she becomes a mother.Very Good illustration.Congrats dear.
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Thanks, G. I’m glad you liked it.
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Beautiful description of a mom-baby bond π
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Thanks a lot, ladylebz. I’m glad you liked it!
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