FRIDAY FICTIONEERS PHOTO PROMPT
Word Count: 100
“BEST PRESENT EVER!!!”, shrieked Anne.
I loved her pink, shiny bike. “Great!”, I said, trying to sound cheerful. “You’ll get one when you’re as old as Anne, kiddo”, said Dad. I felt sadder.
That night, I sneaked into the garage. Suddenly, there was a flash of light. “Knew it!”, whispered Dad, shocking me.
He walked towards me, pulling out something from his pocket. “Here, Blueberry lollipop. Your favorite”, he said. I took it from him, teary eyed.
The garage echoed with my cry, “Why can’t I have a bike?”, as Dad scooped me in his arms and carried me home.
-Yuhu!
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Yuhu’s Corner:
This story is a part of the Friday Fictioneers Photo Prompt Flash fiction challenge. Every Friday, a photo prompt is provided by the organizer Rochelle Wisoff-Fields. The participants have to come up with a 100 word story. You can check out the other entries here.
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Oh, the cruelty of childhood, especially to be the younger sibling. This story just yanked at my heartstrings. Wonderfully written. Enjoyed reading it. 🙂 ❤
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Thanks a million. I’m so glad you liked it. Yes, I do agree. People say that the younger sibling always gets the way. But it needn’t be so. Thanks a lot for reading.
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Really? The younger one… I don’t even remember my two older half-brothers anymore. They’re both dead drug addicts.
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Oh, dear! I’m really sorry.
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at least, she can look forward to having the bike when anne outgrow it. 🙂
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Ha Ha! How true. I used to get my brother’s broken toys too.
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Hahaha his broken toys, sounds sad but true. Kind of went through the same
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Ha Ha! So funny…
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I like your efforts with this one.
Keep it up! 🙂
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Thanks a lot! 😃
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It is so hard getting it right for siblings of various ages. So I hope that dad is building a bike for her in his garage 🙂
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Ha Ha! I sure hope he does… Poor Dad.
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So cute!! 😀
I was that kid though. I was supposed to get one at 5. But my older brother got badly hurt and then i couldn’t get a bike anymore! No, youngest siblings don’t always get their way, I’m proof
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Ha Ha! So am I! I hope you got to ride a bike later, though.
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I did not hey. I’m a 23 year old that doesn’t know how to ride a bicycle. Imagine!
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Ha ha! You should probably gift yourself one! I can ride a bike but nothing more, not a car or a motorbike.
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Hahaha that sounds like a bad idea I can call am investment and end up not using hehe
You should graduate from two wheels to 4, no? 😀
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My sense of direction is pathetic! I would be extra dangerous if were driving a car!
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LOL “extra dangerous” does sound like a hazard. Let’s stick to the bicycles, they work fine as a mode of transport too! :’) 😀
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That’s the plan!! Ha ha!
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My younger daughter – now 47 – tells me she always envied her elder because she got the new clothes, not the hand-me-downs. Life is hard.
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I think I can understand that. Although, I do love using my brother’s old stuff. But I’m sure that the older siblings would have some thing to complain about too.
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Dear Yuhu,
I was the younger child. I always felt like my brother was favored. In retrospect, he wasn’t. He was just older. Cute story…and kudos to the understanding dad.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Glad to have your feedback. I can totally relate to what you felt. And yes, I love the Dad character too. Thanks for reading!
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Cute story.I am sure that the loving and caring dad has planned the bike for his cute daughter.She will get it when she can handle it with care.
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I feel the same way, G. Glad you found the story cute.
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Good story. I was an only child–sort of–so I didn’t have those woes but your story gives a good idea.
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Thank you so much. But I must say, only child ‘sort-of’ sounds interesting!
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It was and it wasn’t. I have a brother and four sisters, but I was a starved baby suffering from mom’s neglect so my aunt & uncle raised me from the time I was three-months old. I had siblings in the summer and for Christmas holidays. I missed them very much other times. And they were jealous of the stuff I got because I was the only one my “parents” were buying for. It was a crazy set-up, really.
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Whoa!! ‘Sort-of’ could mean so much. But I must say, you are lucky to have found people to care for you!
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It was an odd situation. My Aunt & Uncle weren’t happy together — my uncle seemed so bitter. I think he did care, deep down, but all we saw on the surface was irritation and verbal abuse. They had one son twelve years older, but dad honestly had no use for boys, not his son and not my brother either, whenever he was around.
My aunt worked all those years and couldn’t afford babysitters, so I was left to raise myself. When my siblings came we ran wild about the city. 🙂 Cousins who knew the situation wondered why A&U ever kept me. But it was as it was.
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The kind of torments we are subjected to as children!!! I sincerely hope things have turned around for you. You deserve to be happy. Hope you have found it.
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Thanks. I did. I married at seventeen, but it took some years to work my way through some of the feelings.
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I’m glad that things worked out for you. I wish you all the happiness in the world. Cheers!
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It’s so difficult to wait for things to come when you’re a child, time seems endless and the adults’ ‘soon’ is an eternety. Love the story.
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That is absolutely true! How soon is soon annyway? I completely agree. Thanks for dropping by! Cheers.
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Cute one…! ^_^
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Thanks a lot! Glad you liked it. 🙂
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