FRIDAY FICTIONEERS PHOTO PROMPT
PHOTO PROMPT © Liz Young
WORD COUNT: 100
“You should’ve seen Anne up there, today! ‘Grandpa’s little girl’, they said”, jabbered the old lady, as she took her seat in her backyard. “Remember you waved at me from the stage during your graduation?”. She giggled in reminiscence.
“You don’t like the snow”, she said looking at the sky, worried.
Back home, Anne noticed her grandma brushing away the falling snow from her grandpa’s tombstone. She ran to fetch her. “Grandma! You’ll catch a cold. Let’s go!”
Ushered into the home, grandma threw a final glance towards her withered love and thought, “I won’t be too long, my dear.”
-Yuhu!
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Yuhu’s Corner:
This story is a part of the Friday Fictioneers Photo Prompt Flash fiction challenge. Every Friday, a photo prompt is provided by the organizer Rochelle Wisoff-Fields. The participants have to come up with a 100 word story. You can check out the other entries here.
Last week, I read all the 76 amazing entries! Here are a couple of stories that I really loved.
Everything Happens for a Reason by Plaridel, who introduced me to the FF group. Thanks, Plaridel.
The Spendthrift by Michael Wynn. I, particularly, loved the conversation in his story.
Love the conversation. I think many of us would love to seek the cemetery for a chat. Love the conclusion.
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Thanks a lot for your feedback. I’m very glad you liked it. Lovely to hear your views.
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I love this. In so few words you’ve evoked so much emotion.
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Thanks a lot, Chris. Glad you could stop by.
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Dear Yuhu,
Sweet and poignant. In a few words I know grandma and grandpa. Nicely done.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Thanks a lot, Ma’m. I always look forward to your feedback! I appreciate it.
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so much emotion tucked below the surface of this piece. i felt the sadness and the longing. well done.
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Thanks for the feedback, Plaridel! ❤
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Man! Heartbreaking 🙁💔😢
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Thanks for reading, Pradita.
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You’re most welcome 😊
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That was just so very beautiful to read and enjoy. seriously. Loved the ebb and flow of it.
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Thanks a million! Your feedback means a lot to me.
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That was beautifully done, Yuhu. I felt no sadness. A joy of living but an acknowledgement that it cannot last forever and the belief she will find her love in the afterlife.
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Absolutely. That’s exactly what I was aiming to convey. The title says withered love, yet she holds him dear to her heart even after he has long gone. Love can never wither away, I feel. Thanks a lot for reading, Dale.
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awwww… 😢 that is touching.
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Arigato, Uchiha! Glad you read my stuff! Eheee ❤❤❤
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whaaaatttt??? senpai come on!!!! i love reading your work and i am a big fan of it.
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Uchiha! That’s so sweet. 😊😊😊
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The conversations at the cemetery are always filled with emotions, some with the love that is lost, some with the fear that we will some day end up here too… And that’s why I love it!
😊😊
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You are absolutely correct. I feel the same way too. Thanks for sharing your views!
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Don’t mention!
It would be great to have your feedback over my new series… 😊😊
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I sure will!
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It sounds like she’s enjoying her life while waiting to join Grandpa. Nice!
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Exactly! Yes, she is. Thanks for reading!
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Cemeteries are truly peaceful places.
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Kinda scary sometimes, too. I guess.
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So many good stories this week, and your story is up there with the best
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Oh! Wow! Your feedback is so encouraging. Thanks a lot for reading.
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Sweet story
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Thanks a lot! Your feedback is most appreciated.
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Lovely! I can feel a triangle of love in this story. People taking care of people. Well done.
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Thanks, Alicia. So glad you felt it. Cheers!
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Wow this gave me chills! So heartwarming and heartbreaking at the same time!
This is perfection! Grandma’s wrinkled shaky hands wiping of the snow flashed before my eyes like a movie!
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What a wonderful comment. Thanks for dropping by. It means a lot!
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Aw, beautiful. What a lovely relationship they share.
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I wonder if such people do exist in reality. Thanks a lot for dropping by.
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Lovely story. Yes they do exist. My parents were two of them.
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Wow! You are extremely lucky. Glad to know that such people exist, too.
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Your story reminds me of an aged couple whowere childless.I had never seen them grumbling about that.They loved each other so much.That lady wanted to see her husband go off first because she knew that could not do anything without her.To my awe the man died first and she followed him on the tenth day.
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Oh my god! Really? How amazing. This is a wonderful story, G. Thanks for sharing!
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Love the picture, story and sentiments. Good to meet you. x
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I’m glad you could visit. Thanks for reading. Cheers!
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It is a very touching story. Nicely written.
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Thanks, buddy!
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There are so many stories to exhume from cemeteries. Many lessons to learn as well. Thank you for sharing.💞
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Thanks for sharing your views. Cheers!
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