FRIDAY FICTIONEERS PHOTO PROMPT
PHOTO PROMPT © Sandra Crook
WORD COUNT :100
A honeymoon suite’s mirror, reflected the love emanating from the couple. “Love you”, she whispered. Her husband looked deep into her eyes and kissed her passionately.
The couple celebrated their 10th anniversary in the very same suite. The mirror now showed a worried looking plump lady, sitting on the bed and her balding husband working at the desk, with his laptop. “Think Anne is OK?”, she asked. Without looking at her he replied, ‘Just a cold! She’ll be fine”.
With work and worry towering between them, the bed in that honeymoon suite failed its purpose for the very first time.
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Yuhu!
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Yuhu’s Corner:
This story is a part of the Friday Fictioneers Photo Prompt Flash fiction challenge. Every Friday, a photo prompt is provided by the organizer Rochelle Wisoff-Fields. The participants have to come up with a 100 word story. You can read the other entries here.
Check out a couple of my favorite stories for the last week’s FF prompt. I’m sure you’ll love these brilliant pieces.
- A touching piece by Barbed Words: W is for The Wedding #AtoZChallenge
- A fun story by Dale: Very Much Alive – Friday Fictioneers
Yuhu 
Great story and i’m loving the new logo 🙂
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Hey! Thanks. I was just painting yesterday and an interesting pattern came out- my new logo. I don’t think it looks perfect though, it is hand painted. Thanks a lot for your feedback.
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I think it’s beautiful!
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That’s so sweet of you. ❤❤❤
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Yes that’s how priorities change. Brilliantly brought out by your play of words
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Thanks a lot, Pradita. Glad you liked it.
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You’re welcome 😊
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Great story, funny and at the same time tragic and reflective of real life. Well done.
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Thanks for your feedback, Iain Kelly. Glad you liked it.
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THIS is why I don’t want to age!! “Beds failing” – Imagine this in 10 years time !
And the logo is very pretty!
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Thanks! I’m so happy you liked the new logo. He He! Yay!
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So sad for them, I hope that they turn things round.
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I sincerely hope so. Thanks for reading, Michael.
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Time changes everything. Good story.
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Sadly, for some, it does. I appreciate your feedback. Thanks, Sascha.
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Good story! I too love your logo.
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Thanks a lot, Ma’m. Glad you like them!
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Very practical and happening episode almost in everyone’s life.With minimum number of words crafted well.I also like your logo.
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Thanks a lot, G. I’m so glad you liked it. I appreciate your feedback.
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Unique take. Well crafted.
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Thanks a lot! Cheers!
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Pithy and practical to the core. Exact reality of life so well captured in such few words!
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Thanks a lot for reading my story. I appreciate your feedback!
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A true mirror of life. Well crafted.
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Thanks a lot, Neel. Glad you could stop by.
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Great story, soooo true to life!!
Thank you for the kind shout out, much appreciated:)
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My pleasure! I did love your story. Thanks for reading.
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Great write! It can get complicated…
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Sadly, I must agree. I appreciate your feedback.
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Lovely touching story about life.
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Thank you so much! I’m glad you liked it.
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Dear Yuhu,
It’s sad when the honeymoon is over. Sometimes it ends sooner than later. Well done.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Thanks a lot, Ma’m. I appreciate your feedback.
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i read somewhere and i’m paraphrasing here that we shouldn’t be sorry it’s over. we should be grateful it happened.
anyway, i love the black and white logo. i know your stories will add color to it as they get better every week.
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Wow! That is so kind of you Plaridel. Thanks for reading. I guess, you are right about being grateful. Cheers.
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He he.. very nicely put! 🙂 Very much the ageing / working/ professional reality.
Well done for the photo prompt…:-)
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Thanks for reading. I appreciate your feedback. Cheers!
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I, too, love the logo.
This was a good piece showing how life gets in the way of romance sometimes. It takes huge effort to keep the fires lit at times!
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Sadly, its true. Thanks a lot, Dale.
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Ah, how time changes things. So true to life.
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Time is scary sometimes! Thanks for reading.
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Beautiful story!! ^_^
It’s strangely fascinating how the priorities change with the presence of little ones in our lives… 🙂 ♡♡♡
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That is so true. I wonder if they must change! I’m not sure.
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But it’s strangely scary how love fades away too… 😦
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I know, exactly. I’m not sure if it fades away or takes another form, since you are so much used to the other person by 10 years.
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You captured the decay that can befall some marriages after a few years.
It is a shame when people forget to keep the love they once shared alive everyday.
It’s like our shoes. We need to keep them polished in order for them to be shiny and bright.
I hope they can rekindle their romantic days before this vacation is over. A beautifully told story.
Isadora 😎
👍🏻 – for the logo
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Thanks a lot for sharing your views, Isadora. I hope too that the couple would get together. I appreciate your wonderful feedback.
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Anything is possible … 😎
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So true!
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Shedding extra weight of thought and body, are both difficult.
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I know, right? Well put. Thanks for stopping by. Cheers!
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