Photograph Β© Yuhu Tama
On a broken rock, I breathe alone,
I, now, see a figure on the other shore.
My heart freezes when I find it’s you,
I begin to fluster unknowing what to do.
A glowing bridge forms before me,
As light structures itself into many a crystal bead.
Pounding pulses nudge me to take the first step,
My craving to see you builds, but I wake up instead.
As darkness blinds me, I drench in sweat.
Unable to hold you even in my dreams, I drown in regret.
–Yuhu
Yuhu’s Corner:
This week’s theme for the photography challenge is Structure. I just love the patterns and the structures that sunlight creates on the surface of water (be it in a lake or in a bucket full of water). Don’t you?
The pattern of the light in this particular photograph reminds of a road or a path on water, which somehow, to me, looks unreal. Like a path that you can take only in your dreams. Or not even in your dreams, like the poor character in my poem.
Love the tone and style of your writing. It’s such a pleasure to read. Can’t wait till your next post is out π
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Thanks a lot for your encouraging feedback. Cheers!
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You take us a journey of emotions. I love how your writing makes me ‘feel’ things. Wonderful.
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Wow! Chris, that’s such a sweet thing to say. You made my day. Lots of love! β€β€β€
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I’m happy to of made your day. Love returned β€β€β€
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Beautiful pic! Good choice for the challenge
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Thanks a lot, Dinesh! Glad you could stop by.
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This is so well woven to form a beautiful poem! π
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Thanks a lot, Vandana!
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Your photograph’s tones are perfect for the tone of your writing. Lovely.
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Thanks a lot. Your feedback is much appreciated. Cheers!
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Loved the imagery.
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Thanks a lot, Aparna. Glad you liked it
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There is nothing in the world that the heart wants more than what the person can’t have. You’ve just penned that down brilliantly here.
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Thanks a lot, Hotohori girl!!!
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πππ My absolute pleasure
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