FRIDAY FICTIONEERS PHOTO PROMPT
PHOTO PROMPT © Danny Bowman
WORD COUNT: 100
Lastly, Anne wore the high heel shoes, the ones to be stripped off first. The mirror reflected a girl with blood-red lips and smoky eyes, someone oddly familiar to her.
She blankly stared into her mug as she stirred the milk and coffee. The swirling white milk reminded her of the path to the hillock, behind her home, in the country. Her eyes closed to picture the simpler, happier times.
“Candy! You’re up!”, called a gruff voice.
Anne became Candy, as she walked up to the pole. Tonight, the stage would be her hillock and the pole, a beautiful tree.
–Yuhu
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Yuhu’s Corner:
This story is a part of the Friday Fictioneers Photo Prompt Flash fiction challenge. Every Friday, a photo prompt is provided by the organizer Rochelle Wisoff-Fields. The participants have to come up with a 100 word story. You can check out the other entries here.
Poignant and beautifully rendered
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Thanks a lot! Glad you liked it.
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This is a beautiful story. 100 words is too economical.
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Thanks a lot, Philip! Glad you could stop by.
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Thanks too.
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Dear Yuhu,
The ending line made me ache. Well done.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Thanks a lot, Ma’m.
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Beautifully done! 🙂
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Thanks a million, Amy. Cheers!
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Another dream of the big city and fame and fortune turned to a nightmare. Well told.
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Thanks a lot. Cheers!
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Well done. The yearning for who she was comes through.
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Thanks a lot for your feedback. I appreciate you stopping by.
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Terrific 100-word story. I do get very jealous. Lol!
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Thanks a lot. What is lovely Anne jealous about?
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That you can write such a great flash fiction and I can’t. 🤣😂🤣
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That’s too kind of you, Anne. But there are no stories that your photographs can’t tell.
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Aw, thank you. 😊🤗💖
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Wow simply excellent
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Thanks a million!
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The last line evokes anger, pain and desolation. An unfortunately true story of some women. You’re so good at evoking pain in the reader. Terrific work!
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You are extremely kind, Pradita. Lots of love.
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Thanks a lot girlie 😊😊
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This looks great 🙂
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Thanks a million!
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